Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Teaser Tuesday {5}


She’s a dreamer, a dancer, absolutely divine. She sits at her vanity, back ramrod straight and eyes staring at the reflection in the mirror. Her head turns to the side and thin, tapered fingers reach up drape her head with pearls; a perfectly rounded stud in each ear, a chain around her neck.

She’s a rebel, a reveller, absolutely ravishing. She runs a brush through her pink hair, the fluffy comfort of bubblegum and cotton candy. Her luscious lips blow out a lazy plume of smoke, arching through the air; they twist and flex like biceps and triceps, muscles corded with strength.

She’s a social butterfly, a fragile beauty. She picks up her Blackberry and taps out an e-mail, fingers flying quickly, mind on autopilot. I love you.

She’s a liar.


Ellen said...

Wow, great descriptions! you get a really vivid visual of the character here, as well as a hint of her personality at the end. Nice tease! :)

Caitlin R. O'Connell said...

Oooh, this is a really intriguing character introduction. I love the repetitions; it makes the whole thing flow really well.

Great tease!

Karla Calalang said...

Wow the descriptions are SO fun! I really love the repetitions too. Very sweet snip!

deltay said...

Thank you guys! :)

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